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Post by Addie on Sept 29, 2006 14:34:25 GMT -5
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Post by smartie on Sept 29, 2006 15:00:43 GMT -5
Awesome work. I commented on DA =3
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Post by Jarwis-finiarel on Sept 29, 2006 16:46:26 GMT -5
Wow, I love it! Only thing bothering me is their breath mist on the last one.
My favourites are the shading and the rain drops on the eye close-up.
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Post by Addie on Sept 29, 2006 17:19:29 GMT -5
Might you be able to tell me why (critque), that way I can fix it for future panels:)?
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Post by Jarwis-finiarel on Sept 29, 2006 18:00:28 GMT -5
The edges of their lines are kinda sharp, leaving it obviously visible that those were made by PS. I know it was all colored by PS, but that's the only part where its visible.
Just saying. Otherwise I like the it :)
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Post by scrii on Sept 29, 2006 20:35:45 GMT -5
Yay! I love the different perspectives!
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Post by swift on Sept 30, 2006 5:07:11 GMT -5
That is completely amazing, again, Kahvie! I love the tension you build, and the way I can picture everything in live-action rather than panels in a comic. Cannot wait for the next page! Keep up the spectacular work!
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Post by shunketsunoroden on Sept 30, 2006 7:06:51 GMT -5
GET UM KAHVIE! 8) Wowy, this page rocks! I have so much trouble keeping my own comic in ineresting perspectives like this! You're so good at it though! It's just amazing! I think it's becuase i've been drawing side veiws since I was young and not much else until now. XD I need some work, any tips? Anyway, this page is amazing. I love how the first few panels really get you wondering what's about to happen. Then it suddenly jumps out at you! So cool! And the breath mist thing looks pretty cool! You're still using the painty style! Oh well, I liked to other better, but it's not like I'll like the comic any less this way!^^ GREAT JOB! I can't wait for the next page!!!!!!!!  |
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Post by myenna on Sept 30, 2006 17:34:38 GMT -5
Jeeze, Kahvie. I think this page is too wordy. Try to cut down on the narration a bit.  JK. I love it!! Can't wait for the next one!! -wants to know what happens next- XD |
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Post by Addie on Oct 1, 2006 0:46:34 GMT -5
The only tips I can think of are to practice, draw big, and practice ;D. Experience helps a lot in artistic development, as well as studying real-life references (corbis.com is a great place to find reference pictures if you are unsure how something would look in a drawing).
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Post by darktide on Oct 1, 2006 1:58:19 GMT -5
Drawing big helps? I always found when i had my lines big it made colouring and details easier...but I never thought about drawing big in general...Do you do any work on paper or is it all on the computer? (Questions here...gushy fandom went on DA >.> |
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Post by Addie on Oct 1, 2006 17:39:33 GMT -5
Yeah, drawing large helps, as one of my art teachers said that it helps build confidence (when you are unsure of your art, you have a tendancy to draw small, he said). Also, I myself always sketch on actual printer paper...the only time I use a tablet is to color things, like the comic. Everything else is done on paper, or real media (colored pencils are teh rocketh)  . |
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Post by kross on Oct 1, 2006 21:43:36 GMT -5
I need a tablet... It would make coloring soooooo much easier on me. I scan in everything, but then I have to make the lineart, and it always takes so long!
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Post by Addie on Oct 1, 2006 21:46:32 GMT -5
I can't do lineart on the computer, tablet or not^^'. I always do my lineart with ink pens, then scan and color it in using layers in Photoshop (which reminds me, I should dig up that tutorial I made a while back, but never posted publically).
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Post by pride on Oct 2, 2006 15:31:26 GMT -5
Big drawing is a good way to build your skills, it gives you more confidence as well. Kavie is right, also Kavie do you go to an art school? Ive just been wondering about that, your art is good. I like it, though right now my computer wont let me see the eighth page but it will soon enough. Good job keep it up ill be looking forward to seeing more of your art in the future, I have you as a friend and get to see all the nifty things you do. Cudos and Choa.
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